Last year, during a writing conference, I was introduced to Hemingway’s short story, Hills Like White Elephants. Since then I’ve been exploring the power of dialogue in my story telling. I’ve always enjoyed writing dialogue, but everything can be taken to a new level.
For my fifty-five word short story, I decided to forget all of those pesky descriptors and stick with talking heads. Enjoy.
“Dude, are you gonna eat that?”
“Still pining for Jadan?”
“Just finish so we can go.”
“Thought so. And if I told you she just walked in?”
“I hope you’ve been practicing. Hey Jadan!”
“What are you doing?”
“I’m just giving you a…whoa. Really? Oh man. Abort mission. Cookies tossed.”