Author Archives: Guy Anthony De Marco

Autocrit.com

I’ve mentioned Autocrit.com on panels at conventions. It’s a very useful tool that can assist any author when they’re polishing up their manuscript. Even when I’m about to send something off to an editor or getting ready to upload a submission, I usually run it through Autocrit first. It finds many common problems and does a decent first-pass analysis of my work. For example, it flagged the fact that I used “first” too many times in this paragraph.

Autocrit is a paid service, but it will analyze short passages for you. If you subscribe, you get more reports and can upload a full novel. Note that I am not an affiliate, so I get nothing for recommending this service. I liked it so much I picked up a lifetime subscription when they offered one, and I was actually driving to a convention when I pulled over and called it in. Yes, I like it that much.

I pasted an old H.G. Wells short story called “The Inexperienced Ghost” into the chute to run this analysis. The sections below are just a couple of the sections you get. Actually, you get pages and pages of information, depending on how in-depth you wish to delve into the work. You can run through each section and update the text within the website.

Most of the analysis that follows comes from just the “Summary” page.

The opening piece is general statistics. Of course it gives word counts, but it also shows number of uncommon words, number of sentences, and the average word length of the sentences.

Manuscript Statistics


General
Number of Words 4881
Number of Uncommon Words 1062
Number of Sentences 461
Average Word Length of Sentences 11

The next couple of sections show statistics on your speech tags and adverbs used with them. They also compare it with recent best-selling novels so you can see how you match up.

The sections that follow are very handy for me. It lets me know how many adverbs, passive voice, redundancies, cliches, and generic descriptions are in the work. These sections alone are worth their weight in gold, since I sometimes use clichés (like I just did) when I should have said it better and in my own words. Here we can see that Herbert could have cleaned up his prose a bit.



Adverbs

Total Number of Adverbs 61
Top 3 suddenly 9
really 4
slowly 3



Passive Voice Indicators

Total Number of Passive Voice Indicators 175
Top 3 was 64
had 47
were 16



Showing vs. Telling Indicators

Total Number of Showing vs. Telling Indicators 186
Top 3 it 107
knew 39
see 18



Generic Descriptions

Total Number of Generic Descriptions 27
Top 3 very 11
suddenly 9
really 4



Clichés

Total Number of Clichés 32
Top 3 the fact is 3
the thing 3
as if 2

Now that I know Herbert should do a bit of rewriting. Most of the time I’m in the same boat. Arrgh…darn clichés.

Continuing on, the analysis shows how the pacing is for the first 50 paragraphs. That should be enough to give you a strong indication if your work has a bunch of dead spots. Herbert didn’t do too bad, in this case.

Finally, the Autocrit summary page will give me an indication of the word and phrase repetition. You’d be surprised how invisible that can be after you’ve been banging away on a keyboard for weeks, reading the same thing over and over.

There are more reports I can use to polish the manuscript. One I always check is the combination report under “Compare to Fiction”. The “personal words” highlighter finds the phrases and overused words that you tend to blindly sneak into the manuscript. It assists me when it comes to repeating the same thing over and over, especially since this sentence was flagged as having a redundant structure and a repetitive phrase.

Remember, you can try it out for free. You won’t get all of the reports, but it will give you a good idea of what you’ll get. Will it ever replace a good human editor? Nope. It does take care of the common junk that editors have to flag, and that gives them more time to find the real issues hidden in your book or story.

Website: http://www.AutoCrit.com

 


 

About the Author:DeMarco_Web-5963

Guy Anthony De Marco is a disabled veteran, a speculative fiction author; a Graphic Novel Bram Stoker Award® nominee; winner of the HWA Silver Hammer Award; a prolific short story and flash fiction crafter; a novelist; an invisible man with superhero powers; a game writer (Sojourner Tales modules, Interface Zero 2.0 core team, D&D modules); and a coffee addict. One of these is false.
A writer since 1977, Guy is a member of the following organizations: SFWA, WWA, SFPA, IAMTW, ASCAP, RMFW, NCW, HWA. He hopes to collect the rest of the letters of the alphabet one day. Additional information can be found at Wikipedia and GuyAnthonyDeMarco.com.

Talk Radio and Podcasts

Most writers are familiar with the usual promotional channels, including advertising on websites, blog exchanges, social media marketing, and having your own author website. One that slides under their radar is getting interviewed on talk radio, which includes on-air, on-web, or with podcasting. Radio show hosts will always need new and interesting material to keep their listeners tuned in. If you’re comfortable having a conversation with a radio personality, you can get your name in front of a new audience.

You might be surprised at the number of available radio stations in your area. In Denver, Colorado, there are 50 FM radio stations and even more AM stations. If you’re wondering why bother with AM or you are surprised it still exists, note that it can sometimes be heard thousands of miles away by people who purchase more books on average, according to several studies. Old AM Radio can and should be on your radar when it’s time to find an interview spot. Online, check places like Wikipedia and RadioMap.US to see what’s out there in your area. RadioMap has some links to station websites and even a way to listen to what’s on the air right now.

Traditional over the airwaves radio shows are obviously still thriving, and some of them fill up their weekend programming with a few talk shows. The subjects can range from bringing in musicians to discuss their work to shows dedicated to literature. As an author, these are the shows you should focus on unless you’re already a well-known musician. Local radio stations are your best bet, since they’re more interested in promoting the neighborhood connection. Additionally, there are thousands of licensed low-power radio stations that provide limited coverage.

Sometimes you can combine two different subjects to make your appearance more appealing. I was asked to appear on a Denver radio show that focused on veterans. The host invited me to have an hour-long conversation about my service in the US Navy, which led into my ebook “Tales from the Fleet”, which was filled with essays, stories, and observations about my time in the military. The time flew by, and it gave me a good bump in sales. I already had all of the individual stories and essays written — I had previously published several of them over a ten year period. I combined all of them into an ebook specifically because of my radio appearance, and the book sold well for several months. Not much additional effort to take advantage of the marketing opportunity.

If you’re more of a Techie and prefer podcasting and Internet-based radio stations, use Google and ask around in your preferred genre. The science fiction crowd tunes in to Patrick Hester’s SFF Signal every week. I kept running into Patrick at most of the Denver conventions. We became friends, and eventually he ran out of top-tier writing talent and asked me to appear on his show. I was ecstatic, and we did an interview over Skype.

Another now-retired Internet radio host asked me to be on one of his shows, The Funky Werepig. This one focused on dark fiction and lots of irreverent humor. The hour-long discussion ranged from writing horror to how to market underwear-scented candles. The Werepig, who is secretly author and comedian Greg Hall in disguise, had a small yet very dedicated audience. I spent a lot of time muting the microphone to stop laughing out loud over the live show.

My two most recent radio/podcast interviews were the one with Patrick at SFF Signal and “What Are You Afraid Of?“, a Ghost Host show with Fox and Phil. For the latter, we discussed three true ghost vignettes I had sent in two years prior.

If you decide to give talk radio a shot, here are a few tips:

  1. Familiarize yourself with the current news and publishing topics. Stay up to date on current events. Being knowledgeable and worldly will build your credibility.
  2. Tie-in a local angle if at all possible. Whether you are talking to a radio show out of your town, Detroit, or London, be sure to tie the local area in to what your conversation is about, especially if one of your novels takes place in or near the city, state, or country where your listening audience resides. By localizing the message, you become someone that understands the audience and, in turn, will keep them tuned in.
  3. Be yourself. Don’t put up a fake persona unless it’s something that is well practiced and established. If an audience perceives you to be fake, what you say won’t matter.
  4. Be careful about political, religious, and sexual topics. No matter which way you choose, you might alienate half of your listening audience. Controversial issues can cause you some grief later, so be aware of that going in to the interview. Unless you’re talking pizza, where you can admit that Brooklyn pizza dominates all others.
  5. Pace yourself so you keep up with the show host. Adjust and match their rhythm. The conversation will naturally keep their audience interested in your message.
  6. Use an index card with your key talking points and a pen. Cross the points off when they’re covered. Try to remember your main focus is to introduce yourself to the audience and to talk about your books. Don’t stray too far off-topic. Additionally, make sure you let people know how to reach you (social media, blog location, conventions you’ll be attending, etc.)
  7. Make sure you give the host your media kit, which should include a headshot for their website, a short bio, and a long bio.  Note how the audience can get in touch with you after the show airs. Consider having either a contest or a special discount code for members of the audience. A 10% coupon might just convert the listeners to dedicated readers.
  8. If you’re in a studio, turn your mobile phone off or put it in airplane mode. If you’re going to be interviewed over the phone, a stable landline or Skype tends to be better than cells. Cell phones are particularly unreliable for on-air interviews, and you may get cut off in the middle of your appearance. If that happens, the talk radio hosts have to fill the time slot without any notice. Just understand that going in, and let the host know what your primary and backup communication methods are. Decide who will call back so you don’t play phone tag for five minutes.
  9. Limit numbers and statistics during your interview. If you have a particular statistic that you think applies very strongly to your message, use it to make your point and move on. If you throw too many numbers at the audience, their eyes will glaze over and they will lose interest and tune out. Harken back to math classes, when everyone around you was doodling instead of learning how to do word problems.
  10. Don’t bullshyte when you don’t know an answer! A radio or podcast appearance is not a test of your intelligence, and you’re not an expert on life, the universe, and everything. If you aren’t familiar with an issue the host brings up or don’t know the answer to a question, don’t be afraid to admit it. You’ll come across as honest and credible.
  11. Try to give your interviews an intimate feel. Remember that radio is a one-on-one communication medium, and it’s just you talking to another person. Talk to the host in a conversational manner, and if there are callers, do the same with them. Imagine you’re all sitting around a table in your kitchen sharing a cup of tea or a spaghetti dinner. This will help keep the audience interested and they’ll be more likely to relate to you.
  12. Bring a couple of copies of your latest book to give to the host. One is theirs, so sign it and hand them a personal copy. The one or two extras should be signed so the station can give them away to their listeners. No shipping needed — the listeners can stop by and pick it up.
  13. Follow up your interview with a thank-you note. If the interview went well, let them know you’d love to come back anytime in the future.
  14. Make sure you thank the press person, the office personnel, the studio engineer, and everyone who works there. If the whole staff likes you, they’ll remember your name when your next book comes out.

Your goal for every interview is to enlighten the listening audience about who you are and to interest them in your book to the point where they’d like to purchase a copy. Be fun and entertaining, and through that you’ll build an audience.


 

About the Author:DeMarco_Web-5963

Guy Anthony De Marco is a disabled US Navy veteran speculative fiction author; a Graphic Novel Bram Stoker Award® nominee; winner of the HWA Silver Hammer Award; a prolific short story and flash fiction crafter; a novelist; an invisible man with superhero powers; a game writer (Sojourner Tales modules, Interface Zero 2.0 core team, D&D modules); and a coffee addict. One of these is false.
A writer since 1977, Guy is a member of the following organizations: SFWA, WWA, SFPA, IAMTW, ASCAP, RMFW, NCW, HWA. He hopes to collect the rest of the letters of the alphabet one day. Additional information can be found at Wikipedia and GuyAnthonyDeMarco.com.

Welcome to 2016!

Happy New Year! Welcome to 2016, and may it be your best year yet.

It’s almost cliché to open January with a “let’s come up with resolutions that we can ignore at the first sign of trouble” topic. Instead, I thought it would be a better idea to focus this month on ways you can actually achieve those writing goals of yours.

We’ll have a wide range of items to help you make January a success. Articles include:

  • Software to help your productivity.
  • Personal methods working authors employ to get their projects completed.
  • Motivation and tips for those days when your muse was out getting hammered at the local watering hole last night.
  • Setting and reaching reasonable and achievable goals.
  • Suggested non-fiction books (and reviews) that are worth your time.
  • Tips for plotting your next book, and tips for winging it.
  • …and plenty more!

Guests this month include Petra Klarbrunn, Stant Litore, and Annik Valkanberg.

In 2016 the Fictorians will debut a monthly author interview series. The project will debut on January 29th, the last weekday of the month. You can expect a new interview monthly.

Tune in every weekday for a new article focusing on the writing lifestyle. Let’s go!

Happy Holidays!

‘Twas ten seconds before Christmas, and all through the house,
Not a creature was stirring, except for an author still working on a story.
Deadlines, deadlines…

Since today is actually Christmas, at least in my time zone, I’d like to wish you and yours a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. If you’re not one who follows this holiday, than I wish you a Happy Kwanzaa, a Happy Chanukkah, or even a Blessed Solstice. The point is, I hope you’re going to be interacting with someone in close physical proximity instead of using your keyboard or smartphone. This year, that won’t be me. It’s a quiet yet oddly warm evening out here in flyover country. This is the second Christmas in a row that I’ll be celebrating alone. Last year, I volunteered to move two of my kids across the country, since my publishing company owns a large box truck. I ended up stranded in a snowstorm when the windshield wipers and the cabin heater broke. At least this year I’m at my writing cabin, and it’s warm. I’d better knock on some wood before I toss it in the fireplace.

Writing can be quite a lonely profession. We all get caught up in whatever writing project or looming deadline that is fast approaching, and we forget that it’s the season to pay attention to those around you. You see a lot of writing advice talking about focusing on writing. There’s a corollary to that thought. Don’t forget to live. Don’t forget to interact. Don’t forget to appreciate those you care about, because one day you might find yourself stranded in a blizzard or alone in a quiet house. Neglecting the truly important things around you just to get the final polish on a short story isn’t worth it. Spend some time with those you love, or even those you tolerate. Sometimes the story is polished enough and you can shove it out the door so you can go play catch with your kid or make your significant other a candlelit dinner.

After all, all work and no play makes Jack go a little crazy in the Overlook Hotel.

Happy Holidays from everyone here at The Fictorians.